Corrections
Here are the mistakes I found in the other blogs :
Vinvent B. :
Hi Vincent !
I found some mistakes in this post.
“<b>I’ve found</b> an <b>interting</b> website with several vidéos on the subject, especially on Special FX jobs”
I think you should write “I found” and I’m sure you have to write “interesting” ^^
“To work in this field, you must have the technical skills to utilize the computer programs. You need <b>this</b> skills to create and produce special effects.”
“skills” is a plural then you have to write “<b>these</b> skills”
Have a good week end !
Vincent H. :
Hi Vincent !
“Hello this is my definition with help of wikipedia about the job of project manager “
I think that “with the help of wikipedia” is a little more correct.
Enjoy your long weekend !
Virginie :
We can’t post comments on her blog
Yacine :
Hi Yacine !
There are some mistakes in your post.
“I wright” is not correct, the good word is “write”
“which is appear” => appeared
“It’s an article of a forum” => I think you should write “article from a forum”
The “s” is missing here : “It return”
“Next time i search on youtube with “making of” and “ILM” keywords and I find a lot of videos talking about visual effects:”
You can say “After that I searched…..and I found”
And the last mistake I found is “in generaly” => “in general”
Yann :
Hi Yann !
I have to make corrections so…
“the twenty eigth” : there is just a switch between the “t” and the “h”
“I enjoy outdoor to” : if you want to say that you like outdoor activities like our teacher, the “o” is missing “I enjoy outdoor too”
“isn’nt” => isn’t
“The first think” => thing
(I think you wrote it too fast ^^)
